Looks much better, thanks. Also in future when posting the contents of a file or terminal, use the code brackets, this allows responders to copy your code and paste the changed code eg. with the above fstab file, someone would have to type out those lines again to provide a solution for you, which would take much longer.
Start with giving all of those extra drives unique names, at the moment 2 of them have the same name 'ntfsfiles'. May I suggest each mount is called by its drive name, eg. 'segate400' 'seagate520' ,wd2tb'. So first, rename those old mount points in your home folder, then change your fstab file to reflect the new names. Use lowercase only. When you've finished, open a terminal and do:
to mount the newly named mount points without having to reboot.
Then right click on those folders you have mounted, and screen shot each of the 3 mounts Permissions tabs.